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u hurt me today...tell me what u think
written by isaac201104:13 AM 3/30/05u hurt me today
in so many ways
the 1st second i sew your face
it made me fill like a disgrace
in my eyes i only new
that 1 thing will come
to u
u hurt me today
it made my cry in hundreds of way
i hope it will happen
to u so u can fill the hurt made
me do what im about to do
u hurt me today
this nifee to my throat
wont hurt
my face will lay in your lap
cuz u hurt me today |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by isaac2011 (3-30-2005 - 04:16 AM)
by Skater_Chick666 (3-30-2005 - 04:16 AM)
| it was ok it could have been better
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by di3dtrying (3-30-2005 - 05:38 AM)
| not trying to be mean but it is ok you said you hurt me then you said knife to my throut WONT HURT when you said taht i said iin my head huh! well keep workin on it youll get it soon! |
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