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Raped By You
written by bloody_tears_girl05:54 AM 3/30/05here i am,
on the bed,
"be still you bitch"
is what you said
you grab my arms,
and pin me down
me screaming,
is the only sound.
im trying to escape,
as you rip off my clothes,
why you are doing this,
nobody knows.
so i lay there,
as you rape me,
this is so wrong
not how it's supossed to be.
feeling the pain,
as you have your way,
i wish i could go back
to yesturday.
now it's over,
but i can still feel you
blame myself,
is all i can do. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i know i write alot about this subject, but its the only thing i can do (besides cut) that makes me feel better.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sweet_surrender (3-30-2005 - 05:56 AM)
| I really love this poem, it has so much power and meaning, and its short and to the point which is refreshing to my long ass oh my god will it ever end poems |
by Bite2BreakSkin (3-30-2005 - 06:18 AM)
| i love this poem.. its tragic and i can easily relate.. it has a lot of meaning and emotion, i love it. take care of yourself |
by (guest) (3-30-2005 - 06:40 AM)
| a lots of emotion..I LIKE THIS ONE really... |
by unwanted_blue (3-30-2005 - 07:27 AM)
| u shouldn't cut ur self it doesn't help......trust me my xbf killed himself by accident when he was cutting......thats a really good poem..........write more......... |
by Jimmy_Lippstikk (3-30-2005 - 08:01 AM)
| my girlfriend was raped by 3 guys at once.....i wish i could meet this guy (if he exists) and kill him for you. |
by magical_goddess_of_nature (3-30-2005 - 08:55 AM)
| oh i am so sorry. i love the poem. but don't blame yourself i would know i was rape when i was 14 to 15 it end a year and half pass and i still blaming myself but i over come it by helping people like us victims of someone else wrong deed. |
by Metal_freak (3-30-2005 - 05:17 PM)
| It is a really good poem and you should keep writing them to let it go the best you can. The people in the world aren't as we wish them to be so sometimes we can't see the real them. Take care |
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