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Bloody Tears
written by Gothic_Pirate08:37 AM 3/30/05It has to end
She made her choice
She's tired of the pain
She's done with her sorrows
So many nights she's cried
All because of you
Her heart's shattered
There's nothing left to mend
She had it all
But you left her broken
A thousand mirrors fell the day you went away
She doesn't understand why
Her eyes are bleeding
Don't you care?
She stood by you for twenty years
But you still don't see all these bloody tears |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this for my mother after my dad left her.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by wind_wanderer (3-30-2005 - 08:40 AM)
by xXx.enigma.xXx (3-30-2005 - 08:42 AM)
| heyy...i hope ur mums allrite now...ppl come n ppl go...all dat remains r da memories dat dey leave bhind of times u spent wid dem..dese memories can b one of da best...or da most sorrowful ones....dese must b one of da saddesr memories of ur life...n ur mums...i like the wasy u xpress urself...evrything is so clear but has such a deep meaning...gr8 stuff mann...rock on! |
by mishy0077 (3-30-2005 - 09:04 AM)
by xXxBlOoDyMexXx (4-3-2005 - 08:44 AM)
| Man i love this one to... ur good this |
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