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silent criticiser
written by butcakes09:12 AM 3/30/05you wanted to put across you point of view,
but didnt want to do it using voices
you cowardly told me what you felt electronically
limiting my responses and choices
i said if you want to discuss it
lets do it maturely in person
but you didnt care about my feelings atall
and the situation only worstened
everytime we talked
it only brought arguments
and everytime we saw eachother
our passings became intense
now ive confronted you in person
about your issues with me
and all they are are 'annoying' things
which everyone possesses to a degree
i could choose to point out
the annoying things about you
but where would that get either of us?
nowhere, even though its true
but since i talked to you face to face
only because i was man enough
we sorted out you problems
no, your not so 'tough'
so next time sumthing is bugging you
about the way God made me to be
confront me to my face
like the man you proceed to see
and then when all is said and done
remember not to forget
God made each person to be unique
so dont say stuff youll regret! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
haha i just made that all up and what im actually writing about happened some time ago... sum time last year... anyways its about a friend ive known for life who i thought had all these MASSIVe issues with me; but after he let me know what was wrong, they were just stupid little things that most people would do... sad thing is, he was too much of a wuss to say it to my face!! but things between us are cool now =D
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