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Cuts
written by damnednforgotten10:43 AM 3/30/05My life has been torn
My feelings ripped out
My insides been shown
Not being able to shout
I will take anything
If you look inside
You will see nothing
This I must hide
Sew myself back up
Always keep it shut
Lift myself up
And never show my cut |
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this is my fav. poem ive made tell me wat u think
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lesbian?straight?bi? (3-30-2005 - 12:44 PM)
| that was really really good |
by Misstress_Avelina (3-31-2005 - 12:38 AM)
| That was awesome how it was worded. ^.^ |
by SpencerChateauisdead (3-31-2005 - 06:54 PM)
| Wow I like this poem. Good work! |
by only_one (4-1-2005 - 07:18 PM)
by sexy_shorty (4-2-2005 - 03:42 AM)
| that really spoke to me, awsome poem |
by Werewolf_Inuyasha (4-2-2005 - 04:09 AM)
by (guest) (4-8-2005 - 09:27 AM)
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