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Slay
written by The Black Halo01:50 PM 3/30/05There's me with my -
Black Jeans
Work boots
And a leather jacket,
Speakers
Hanging down
Making quite a racket.
There's you with your -
Tight pants
Nike shoes
And shitty fake gold chains,
Pussy
Girlfriend 'cause
You can't get one with brains.
So who's better off,
The man or the bitch,
Who'd be the one,
With his whooped-ass in the ditch? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (3-30-2005 - 01:57 PM)
by Genocide Reaper (3-30-2005 - 02:08 PM)
| Just note, bro. My laughter comes from the mental image I get of seeing a guy upside down in a ditch, with shiney nike's sut free while the rest is demolished. |
by The Black Halo (3-30-2005 - 02:14 PM)
| Heh. That's actually a familiar sight for me. |
by harrytherhino (3-30-2005 - 03:36 PM)
| could u be more of a crap poet i think not |
by The Black Halo (3-30-2005 - 06:58 PM)
| Harry, you're blatantly an emo-prick or a chav. Either way, you know you can't write poetry to save your lfie, so you're projecting your insecurities onto me.
Tip: Try flaming someone that cares. |
by ashevil (3-30-2005 - 07:57 PM)
| fuck that this is pretty gay. |
by The Black Halo (3-31-2005 - 12:22 PM)
| Oh no, ashevil has returned.
You are a fucking prick that can't write poetry at all, but constantly gets in the top 25 because you have 'suicide' in almost all of your poem's titles. You fucking suck. |
by unpure_substance (4-1-2005 - 04:14 AM)
| Grand work Ethereia.Don't listen to these ignorant,emo fucks,they lack poetic talent,however,you don't and this poem and your rest proves that point. |
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