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Love, power
written by CLC_RockGirl03:29 PM 3/30/05Love, a feeling, an emotion, a curse,
A spell, a passion, a fire, a sharp pain.
Love is just this, but wait it gets musch worse.
It can take its form in many shapes;
It is hard to tell when it is truely real.
Love can blind you like being behind drapes;
Love is something everyone wants to feel.
Hate is drawn to love and again understanding,
Understanding that true love can be power,
But love is dangerous and is dieing.
Don't you see? When love is not used wisely,
Love, our power can be very deadly. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by pipa (3-30-2005 - 03:42 PM)
| nice poem, describes love pretty well, a few spelling mistakes btw. keep writing. Xx |
by Evilmonkeysdance (4-15-2005 - 04:17 AM)
| not compleatly the SONNET pattern, but its good, i like it alot and can relate...god it weird how so many people feel the same way u do, yet you're still alone? |
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