ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: Should I
Should I
written by Sk8trboy16
05:43 PM 3/30/05
As i sit on my bed with a gun drawed to my head, i think about my life and how it was a dread. should i do this to free my soul to a land far away that has never been told. why am i doing this everyone ask taking my life away atlast, but everything i do is only for a reason to cut my self to make sure that i'm breathing, bleeding slowly drifting away with nothing to show to a land thats so far away, i did this quitly and i want you all to know i love you mom and dad, Now tis world is way too cold.


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I just thought i could make a lil sumthin sunthin ...."" This isnt Real""

[ View Sk8trboy16's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 402 times


» Comments / Feedback
by xXxGoNexXxInSaNexXx (3-31-2005 - 09:15 AM)
damn that was hella deep. not to get to personal but i have been in many situations like that where i do things just to get a rush to know my still living still feeling something, anything, to cut myself to know im alive, but anyway that was a hella good poem

by unwantedandunloved (3-31-2005 - 09:29 AM)
that was really good too!! love ya, Amy

by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 08:39 AM)
very good just dont do it

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.