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Should I
written by Sk8trboy1605:43 PM 3/30/05As i sit on my bed with a gun drawed to my head, i think about my life and how it was a dread. should i do this to free my soul to a land far away that has never been told. why am i doing this everyone ask taking my life away atlast, but everything i do is only for a reason to cut my self to make sure that i'm breathing, bleeding slowly drifting away with nothing to show to a land thats so far away, i did this quitly and i want you all to know i love you mom and dad, Now tis world is way too cold. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by xXxGoNexXxInSaNexXx (3-31-2005 - 09:15 AM)
damn that was hella deep. not to get to personal but i have been in many situations like that where i do things just to get a rush to know my still living still feeling something, anything, to cut myself to know im alive, but anyway that was a hella good poem |
by unwantedandunloved (3-31-2005 - 09:29 AM)
that was really good too!! love ya,
Amy |
by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 08:39 AM)
very good just dont do it |
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