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fligh high
written by Treehugger07:05 PM 3/30/05i fight the dogs, to save my life
if i die tonight it wont matter
i will fly on high, to get to you
if i fall tonight it wont matter
flying high, through this broken misty sky
soaring through, falling to my doom
rising up, my wings are warm
and i land...
there is so much burning inside of me
so much i want to give to you
i cant let this go, these words are my pain
this fire burns bright when you are near
i need to break out of this cage
and soar once again
riding on the wind of your love
you cant stop me
i will fly high
no-one will see my pain
i am above you all
my mind is a sanctuary
bruised and battered, its time to live again
fly high.....fly high.....
soar through the sky and live again |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by joeslady2004 (3-30-2005 - 07:07 PM)
by joeslady2004 (3-30-2005 - 07:09 PM)
| ur very weird but u should still read some of mine they r better! U will like them and u should comment on them!!! U suck at writing poetry by the way! I mean no offense or anything but they r reeeally bad!!! And they r weird and idsturbing! Who says the word I will fight the dogs??? Seriously common!! WTF is up with that? That is really gay!! Mine r way better!!!!!! Really they are trust me!!!! |
by misunderstoodbitch (4-1-2005 - 09:32 PM)
| ok joeslady you are so fucking gay you should quit dissing peoples poems and shit they havent done anything to you now have they? i have read some of your shit and they arent that good and 'fighting the dogs' could mean something you dont know about! |
by misunderstoodbitch (4-1-2005 - 09:32 PM)
| ok joeslady you are so fucking gay you should quit dissing peoples poems and shit they havent done anything to you now have they? i have read some of your shit and they arent that good and 'fighting the dogs' could mean something you dont know about! |
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