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some cutters out there(comments)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP12:39 AM 3/31/05the cuts feel so fresh and real
its my way of life
to the blade i kneel
being close to death so i don't feel ne more
no need to wonder what we're here for
this blade can not break my heart
this blade does not tell lies
this knife has been here from the start
and lifts me up in strife
i'm not diseased for feeling this way
there r many of us
look around
this blade is my remidy if feel today
its there with me while i lay on the ground
i control this blade
this knife ,this blood
i know just how deep i have to cut
i feel alive for the moment it seeps thru my veins
and watch as they slowly open and shut
this blade will never betray me
it won't take something of me and run
it helps to heal my hearts bruises
another cutter has just begun |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fuck_perfection (3-31-2005 - 12:53 AM)
by BrokenBabe2702 (3-31-2005 - 01:09 AM)
| your poem is really good and really true i love it |
by damnednforgotten (3-31-2005 - 01:18 AM)
| nice, its great and so damn true |
by lpcrawlinggrl (3-31-2005 - 01:18 AM)
| that is good... although i know that i was lucky enough to quit... one day, found it worthless... tired again, still nothing... nice poem... |
by synthetic_razor (3-31-2005 - 01:22 AM)
| Great poem. I can completely relate. :D *hug* |
by ~*babygurl*~:# (4-13-2005 - 02:44 PM)
| hey gurl dis is da kooolest 1 yet
luv ya
hugs~n~kisses
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