ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: your gone
your gone
written by bananaboat14
01:18 AM 3/31/05
i love you and wen u used to paint my toes and take pictures of my goofy pose. you and i had everything and then ur gone in just one bang the last gasping breath was our promise to our secret outr own little bet .. the gasping i love u baby u have won were ur last teary bloody words ... why did u have to get hi cuz i knew one day that last puff would be ur good bye. u'll always be in my heart


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
my dad

[ View bananaboat14's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 460 times


» Comments / Feedback
by Dead2you (3-31-2005 - 01:25 AM)
I'm sorry and I know what you're going through

by craziness (4-1-2005 - 04:26 AM)
So sad.....I'm very sorry. I give your poem a 10/10.

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.