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I Don't Care What They Say
written by greenybean0603:13 AM 3/31/05Everytime I look into her eyes
It's like looking into the starry skies.
It reveals the legends that are told.
In fact they are breath taking to behold.
Your slender frame entrances me,
Girl you are my fantasy.
I know your heart as you know mine.
I even know how you feel inside.
Give me a chance girl,
You know I'd do you right.
Let us give it a whirl,
With you, I'd never fight.
I love you with all my heart,
I swear if you say yes nothing will break us apart. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fallen_&_lost_angel (3-31-2005 - 03:28 AM)
| it's real cute and i wish my boi was like u...well kinda...anyway good poem |
by (guest) (3-31-2005 - 04:07 AM)
| its really cute i like it alot and im feelin da flow of this poem |
by (guest) (4-16-2005 - 03:38 AM)
| I know exactly what you meant by the poem. I went through the same problem. It's good to know that someone out there is like me. It's hard to see that girl everyday and not be able to have her. Your not alone. If you want to talk to me my e-mail is: rmonzello@yahoo.com That's if you want to chat or something. |
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