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» Poem: Confusion And Lost Hope.
Confusion And Lost Hope.
written by Josh_x
09:55 AM 3/31/05
Life never really was easy
I dont think its supposed to be
But was it meant to be like this
Was i made for rape
Was i made to be broken down
My existance confuses me
I don't know what to do
Should i stay
Should i go
Would you actually know i was gone
I'll ask god why
If you're so good why do you let this happen
Why did you give up on me
Couldn't you see
I had so much more life to live
Can't you make it stop
Tears streaking down my face
I lost all hope
I lost all faith
I should just leave this life
Without a trace.


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» Comments / Feedback
by black_heart_emo_girl (3-31-2005 - 12:28 PM)
omg josh. you really are an amazing writer. please don't give up on yourself though. it will get easier. i promise you. rape, abuse, anything. you'll get through it all. nothing will break you down. only YOU can break yourself and give up on life. please think of who you would be hurting before you did something like that. pleasr josh, 'cos you have got so much more going for you than you think. i know i don't know you, but i feel like i do. keep going josh, if that means getting counselling and stuff, then so be it. but please, don't give up. luff yas bbz, lucy xx

by Josh_x (3-31-2005 - 01:00 PM)
don't worry, i wouldn't take my life cause i know how much it can hurt everyone whos been there for you. And yeah ive got a phycoligist at the moment .. it doesnt really help though, they just make me feel worse about myself.

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