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My bloody suicide note
written by The Black Halo12:57 PM 3/31/05If ever I were to die,
Think only this of me:
Ever strong, I always was,
A fighter past the end.
When I get to hell's dark gates,
I'll be sure to make some freinds.
I'll overthrow the overlord
Then pierce his scaly skin,
Volconoes will erupt
From the darkness that's within.
And in the tide of lava-flow,
You emo-fucks will drown,
I'll burn you to a crisp and
I will drop you to the ground.
My suicide has only been
Because of hate inside,
My loathe for emo-fucks
Is why I had to die.
There is some corner of a foreign field,
That is forever emo,
As long as I'm the overlord,
You emo-fucks will go. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sphinx666 (3-31-2005 - 02:25 PM)
| hahahaha i dnt get it but its kinda shit, not my cup of tea, its kinda repeated daily, u know, are they make me wanna commit suicide bla bla bla, write bout reall life stuff ffs its so much more reveling tio others who u are |
by Morbid Angel (3-31-2005 - 02:45 PM)
| lolz@dumbasswhodoesntgetit |
by harrytherhino (3-31-2005 - 03:43 PM)
| sphixx u r rite people should rite about what they want but rite something interesting weve heard it all before
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by The Black Halo (3-31-2005 - 04:23 PM)
| LMAO at the 2 idiots that just read the title and not the poem. |
by sphinx666 (3-31-2005 - 05:37 PM)
| erm..actually ur the idiot ! coz i did read it, it s still aload of cok n bull bout how u cnt stand a type of person, who gives a shit, everyones got a kind of person they hate, its to common, yer it expspressed ur feelings but at least write bout sommet tht makes sumone wanna read more , n try to undersyand why u feel tht way, like my poem..daddy? n the one bout my mom, there real feelings, there reall life, u may not bleve it but tht the way it is, im sorry if u dnt get wat im saying bur, thts ur prob not mine, sphinxy xx |
by The Black Halo (3-31-2005 - 08:03 PM)
| What, you don't like my poetry 'cause I'm too strong to write about cutting, and abuse? That time's been and gone, girl, and if you think there's no emotion in this, you should read between the lines.
Oh, and before you comment on my poetry, at least have the decency to use proper English.
If you want my old emo stuff, check out Trapezium. That's my old accoutn, and that's the shit I wrote when I was all depressed. I got past that stage, and I realise how stupid it was. So get off your high horse, and realsie this is much more individual thatn that emo-shit that's posted 200 times a day, on the hex. |
by Genocide Reaper (3-31-2005 - 10:05 PM)
by unpure_substance (4-1-2005 - 04:16 AM)
| Will these redudant,illterate fucks stop? |
by Ephemeral-Euphoria (4-1-2005 - 10:00 AM)
| God damn those emo-fux!!!! I will join you in your war!!! |
by Metal_freak (4-1-2005 - 06:28 PM)
| I thought it sucked had no meaning. Was totally shitty and i read the whole thing but even if I had just read the title it would be shitty. How do you like it when every one disses your poems doesn't feel good does it and Do you just read the title of every one elses poems that you drag through the dirt. I QUESS SO or you'd see its not all about the puncuation or spelling of wors its about the poem and its meaning. Thats why your poems suck because you spend to much time fixing them up to see what trully matters. |
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