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» Poem: Raped In The Ditch
Raped In The Ditch
written by untidy_posession
08:05 PM 3/31/05
Watching my breath come out in icy rasps,
My school shoes padding on the soft cold grass,
From somewhere behind me I hear the crack of twigs,
Someone grabs my ankle and pulls me into the ditch,
Thorns cut my face as I struggle to break free,
I'm told that If I scream "He's gonna kill me"
I feel the cold hard metal of a knife against my throat,
I am gagged with the sleeve of my purple stripy school coat,
I close my eyes and try to wish away the pain,
Try to ignore the strong smell of vodka and cocaine,
Everything suddenly feels suspended,
And I pray that it has ended,
I feel sick, I feel disgusting,
As I feel the layer of blood and mud encrusting,
Finally he is satisfied, stands up, puts the knife away,
Laughing and telling me, he had fun today.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
true. all of it. comments welcome.

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» Comments / Feedback
by KiNkY_BloNdE! (3-31-2005 - 08:08 PM)
wow. this is amazing. n i can relate to it.

by eminem_lover (3-31-2005 - 08:11 PM)
that is a really kick ass peom.u probably dont want to hear this but i understand,all i can say is,my ex-boyfriend

by OxBlack_BeautyxO (3-31-2005 - 08:27 PM)
>.

by Misstress_Avelina (3-31-2005 - 08:35 PM)
Thats nice. It wasn't as nasty as I thought it would be from reading the title... It was just enough desciption were you could tell what was happening. Nice job.

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