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Temptations
written by shallowgirl137709:40 PM 3/31/05slowly sinking into me temptaions so great i fear for control. It's calling for me, begging me to join in it' sevil duty. Shall i go? It's calling out to me, calling my name. Shrieking like the banshee it is.
Chorus- Your power is so great, im losing my grip on all i hold dear. Someone help, im drowning in temptation for desire.
it's pulling me down now, the path is clear, It's been waititng for me. I feel the pain, its claws are sinking into me, slowly ripping me, the pain is so intense i fear for my life.
Chorus
I'm awakening, slowly dread dawns upon me, "Where am i? How did i get here?" The marks upon my wrists and neck explains it all. Why did i do it? I desire the pain and love the feeling |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is one of my worst poems, ill put some of the good ones in here after i get them back from our school contest. oh and no this is NOT about sex
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| » Comments / Feedback | by isaac2011 (3-31-2005 - 10:00 PM)
by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 08:25 AM)
by tamorapierce (4-5-2005 - 05:38 AM)
| deepness, intenseness, gonethroughitness |
by bloodangel1377 (4-6-2005 - 07:48 PM)
| this poem sucks, i should have wrote it better. im suprised no ones leaving me comment s on what i can improve and whats good. *shrugs* i cannot wait to put on my very good ones you guys will be dying to read them *licks lips* |
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