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» Poem: Thank You
Thank You
written by ieatsmellysocks
01:09 AM 4/1/05
I see the glances you shoot me,
And i remember how you ask if im ok.
Smiling as i roll my eyes,i say yes,
But theres sarcasm in everything i say.

You pretend that your not looking
Yet out of the corners of my eyes,i see
Its like im something you cant figure out
But all i am is me.

You try to make me smile,
And a few times i actually do.
I know i must look so sad,
But it shouldnt matter to you.

Thank you for making me smile,
Even though the pain is still there.
Thank you for trying to make me happy,
And thanks for pretending you care.

Well,i sit there in class
Rocking and staring into space.
You call on me,but im drawing again,
And i cant get the confused look off my face.

I know that im not normal
I would do anything to be
I know it and i wont deny it
And i see the way you glance at me.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is to a teacher of mine who is always telling me to smile,because i look so sad in class and he knows i have no friends.I wrote the poem real quick so it isnt good,please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by *crimson*tears* (4-1-2005 - 01:11 AM)
the poem's amazing and i can totally relate...

by simplyfaded (4-1-2005 - 01:22 AM)
loved it! i can totaly relate. great job!

by 0restes (4-1-2005 - 01:34 AM)
Always happy to see something with a bit more of a happy tone. Great job, keep writing.

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