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music (comment on this.. right now!!!!)
written by XdarkXaliceX09:09 AM 4/1/05i love good music
i dislike shitty music
good music is great |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yes this was made by mi best friend aya (villezsweet666) in a total of 1 min.. hope u like it!! hey go to her pero n chek out some of the ones i made
haikus r easy
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lilster505 (4-1-2005 - 01:41 PM)
| NICE! that was way better then my suckky poem! :-)
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by craziness (4-1-2005 - 10:51 PM)
by depressedheart12 (4-2-2005 - 02:39 AM)
| I'd say 7/10 coz it needs more emotion. |
by (guest) (4-10-2005 - 05:00 PM)
| i think that more thought could be put behind it... though you are right that haikus are easy |
by (guest) (4-13-2005 - 06:25 PM)
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