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Poem From a Friend
written by Dark Shady09:14 PM 4/1/05A bloodstained love letter just for you,
A broken heart that's ripped in two.
The dreams I had have now been broken,
The last words you have spoken.
You said that we weren't meant to be,
Then you walked away from me.
All of these memories kept safe in my head,
you'll regret leaving me after I'm dead.
I hope that you are happy now,
I'm sure you are,
I don't how I was willing to give you my heart,
All you did was rip it apart.
Now all I can do is sit here and cry,
Cut myself and say goodbye.
Why can't I hate you I want to so bad,
I can't live life being this sad,
I loved you so much
I still do,
I no longer breath because of you. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Bekky, plz dont get mad i loves u=)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by vampie_coon (4-2-2005 - 09:12 AM)
by vampie_coon (4-2-2005 - 09:14 AM)
| wow that was really good. i loved it |
by Chiyo-chan (4-2-2005 - 07:24 PM)
| not bad, just that limericks are supposed to be happy and funny. Thats okay though! nice work! ^.^ |
by rammstein-freak (4-3-2005 - 10:56 AM)
| wow, a sad limerick! thats a new one! well done |
by (guest) (4-9-2005 - 06:32 AM)
| I'm not mad...but why exactly did you put it on your thingy thing?? just wondering k bye! |
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