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» Poem: Better side(plz leave comments)
Better side(plz leave comments)
written by mansonlover91
10:31 PM 4/1/05
To you I am a mean person
And you think i'm not a good person to talk to
But I am
I'm a very nice person
I just keep this person locked away
Locked away so no one will find her
But because I have locked her away for so long
She is being set free
Being set free little by little
And soon you will think I am not myself
I want this nice careing person to be free but only
Only to some people I trust
Because some people will love me for it
And some people will hate me for it
So only some people
I will let see the better side of me


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Leave ur comments either good or bad tell me what i did good or what went wrong

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by Normality (4-1-2005 - 10:35 PM)
That was a lot better than what I can do GOOD JOB.

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