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written by Nikki308
04:59 AM 4/2/05
What happened to us?
We were perfect for each other.
But you never told the truth
you had another lover.
I saw you two together
and you said she was just a “friend”.
I wished that that was true
but your lies just have to end.
You always say you’re gonna call
and I’ve learned you never will,
cause you’re out smoking with your friends
or trying another pill.
What came between us
I thought we were meant to be?
I fell for you so fast
What the fuck is wrong with me?
You blame your problems on me
and you say that I don’t care
The truth is I do,
but when I try to help
You're never there.
You used to hug & hold me
when I was suicidal,
but now you say to shut up
and take another midol.
When we hang out and you see your friends,
you just run off and ditch me,
but this time it’s different
I’m following you
to prove what my friends see.
I saw you two walk up
to some giant thugs.
You gave them the money you had
to pay for all the drugs.
But something happened then,
that you did not intend:
one pulled out a blade
and stabbed your only friend.
I felt like I was stationary
but I saw that I was moving,
but a gun came out of nowhere,
and the men just started shooting.
I took a blade to my heart,
a bullet to my skull.
The blood runs from my veins.
They’re no longer full.
I’m no longer living.
my life is done;it’s through.
I tried to call for help,
but there’s nothing I can do.
I wished that you were by my side,
saying I’d be ok.
But all you did was run off,
with nothing left to say.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is just something I wrote when I was really upset. I love to write poetryand so I thought I should make this. It's a little more intense than my others but, hey it works.

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» Comments / Feedback
by smashed_heart (4-2-2005 - 07:04 AM)
omg it sounds like a realtionship of mine

by Buffy-Fan (4-2-2005 - 11:13 AM)
That was really good.

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