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A Life (please comment)
written by magical_goddess_of_nature10:32 AM 4/2/05I led myself down to sleep,
To pray all my problems will go away.
I can't stand the pain.
I try not to cry myself to sleep,
But it just too much for my heart to keep in,
I try not to care,
But it just hurts me more.
I love to care.
No one see that i am hurting.
I want a life.
I want no hate,
But it is there.
And it's no way to stop it.
I hate feeling alone.
In this life with no one to love,
I try not to care,
But it just hurts me more.
I love to care.
No one see that i am hurting.
I want a life.
The sorrow of all my pain lock away,
I just want to died,
To feel the pain to be alone,
Iwant to be love.
But no one cares about that.
I try not to care,
But it just hurts me more.
I love to care.
No one see that i am hurting.
I want a life.
My life is nothing,
That's how it feels.
I don't see when someone loves me.
Why is my life this way?
How will i stay alive?
I try not to care,
But it just hurts me more.
I love to care.
No one see that i am hurting.
I want a life. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by KoRn_Klown (4-2-2005 - 10:33 AM)
| I remember feeling like that.. I never knew quite exactly how to get the emotiona across. I think you did a fine job. Keep it up! |
by mishy0077 (4-2-2005 - 10:35 AM)
| wow. exactly how i used to feel at one stage |
by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 06:11 PM)
| that's really good i try to wirte and it never comes out like tht....keep it up |
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