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My One Fear(plz comment)
written by dark_child0706:28 PM 4/2/05This whole time I thought I was unbeatable,
I thought I was fearless,
It never occured to me,
that I really did have a weakness.
You are my weakness,
and the thought of losing you,
it terrifies me,
I dont know what I would do if I lost you.
You are on my mind when I wake up in the morning,
then still when lay in bed at night,
and even when I stand in the pouring down rain,
with nothing around but a swirl of street lights.
I refuse to cry,
I refuse to admit I have a weakness,
I refuse to admit,
I am no longer fearless.
But it is just,
so true,
My one fear is,
thew thought of losing you! |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Scythe42 (4-2-2005 - 06:30 PM)
wow,that was awsome. Especially the rythym. |
by (guest) (4-2-2005 - 10:46 PM)
thats a very good poem lilcorky and you don't have to worrie your never lose us not in a million years love ya danny |
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