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Pain Inside
written by depressedlittleone
09:07 PM 4/2/05
This Pain Inside eats away at my soul
It's getting so bad that I have lost my control
Somewhere I lost who I really was
I guess I can't find it because I'm so preoccupied with all of this hatred inside but this time I can't let it slide
I have to do something about it instead of my thoughts just being crowded
It's time to take action and kick some ass
Instead of always being the loser of the class
I'm sick of not being able to get rid of this pain inside it doesn't go away
Believe me I try to destroy it every day
But it just sits in the back of my mind
I can't rewind what happened so now I am blind
I guess I will just have to collide
With this horrible pain inside


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» Comments / Feedback
by The Pope (Clayton) (4-2-2005 - 09:49 PM)
When you do collide if the pain and if you overcome it, you will far more powerful than you ever were before!

by AthiestAnarchist (4-2-2005 - 09:51 PM)
I really liked it...thanks for commenting on my poem. I hope things can get better for everyone.

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