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» Poem: REBORN
REBORN
written by MansonSlave
09:14 PM 4/2/05
I hate you, you cause so much pain, you will never let me be happy, you have my happiness in you junk box and rarely take it out.

You do play with my emotions, I wish you's destroy them, take my heart and destroy it completely,So I can't feel anymore.

Please destroy my emotions mainly LOVE, HOPE AND HATE. Burn LUST And ENVY. Blind JEALOUSY And Sufficate GREED. Crucify CARING And LOYALTY. Please Give HAPPINESS, PITTY, FEAR, AND BRAVERY A Painful death. And Hang Yourself From The Cell That Contains My Heart.

Now I Am REBORN with no LOVE, PITTY, ENVY, JEALOUSY,ANGER, GREED, HOPE, CARING, LUST, No Emotions No Life Just Invisible, Pass through The World Unknown and Unloved, My Heart A Black Hole, These are my Current Feelings and I Do Know Why I Feel Them. I Just Have No One To Tell. No One Who Can Help. I Told God But Not Even He Cared.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
GOD DID EVENTUALLY HELP ME. I FIGURED I WAS THE ONE THAT HAD TO GIVE HIM A JUMPSTART

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» Comments / Feedback
by dark_love_angel (4-2-2005 - 09:26 PM)
JESUS CHRIST!!! that poem has so much passion. so much anger in it... i love it... keep writing... please

by The Pope (Clayton) (4-2-2005 - 09:45 PM)
You should turn you passion and feelings into something. You abviously have the power

by misunderstoodbitch (4-2-2005 - 10:44 PM)
all i can say is... nice...

by Scythe42 (4-2-2005 - 10:58 PM)
wow.....that was amazing. I can really relate,but then I got help,and now i'm safe,happy,complete. I hope you feel that way.

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