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I hate myself and want to die
written by depressedlittleone05:28 AM 4/3/05I hate myself and want to die
My life has just been one big lie
No one is my true friend
Will the agony ever end?
I fear that my whole life I will spend
Depressed and not looking at the good things in life
And so I imagine killing myself with a knife
I can't get the image of me being dead out of my head it fills others with dread but myself with relief
Stuck without a thread of hope The only way out of this one is to hang my fears on a rope or even my head
Everyone else has said that it will be fine
But it will never be okay I wish I was dead
Then I wouldn't have this pain
I can feel my veins spilling blood like rain
Every pore is open and I can't speak
Now people can see that I can be weak
Cuz when people piss me off I turn the other cheek but that's cuz they make me mad
And if I let it get to me I'll kill them and their dad
So fuck the world
FUck this life and the people in it
Fuck you for trying to calm me down
I am not fine
If I was I wouldn't be writing this rhyme. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by smile_always08 (4-3-2005 - 09:45 AM)
| WOW! you have problems! go get help NOW!!!! wanting to kill yourself is SO NOT COOL!!!! make some friends go to some parties!!! enjoy your life! don't end it! |
by Ruined_Hopes (4-3-2005 - 06:09 PM)
| im not going to try and calm you down, because i feel the same way.
i know everyone will be better off with out me even if they say they wont. but i know the truth and it is that they will be better off with out me. and life to me does not seem fine, but screwed up like me!! bye |
by Nug (4-4-2005 - 05:27 PM)
| i know this feelings pretty good.
Kurt Cobain, rest in peace.
This world needs depressive people.
You just show your feelings. |
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (4-5-2005 - 01:38 AM)
| pretty but kind of attention seeker like |
by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 07:02 AM)
| ok i cant tell you that u r fricken crazy but i feel sorry for you cuz there is so much good in life you just have to go find it! Believe me I have been through some shitty shit too but I got through it, just hold ur head up !!and fuck what people think |
by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 03:36 PM)
| I love the amazing rhyming pattern that you have used. I especially enjoyed the fact that you will kill me and my dad, well done |
by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 10:18 PM)
| Hey,
I suffer from extreme depression.
we should swap poems sometime.
ICPgoth@msn.com |
by Genocide Reaper (4-5-2005 - 10:46 PM)
| Fucking kill yourself then. |
by Zorg666 (4-6-2005 - 04:34 AM)
| smokin hell yeah sooooo cool
plz read and comment mine |
by (guest) (4-6-2005 - 04:46 PM)
| I agree people say don't do it but they really don't care. |
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