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the knife: my escape
written by deadrebel5305:17 AM 8/2/04i press the blade against
my skin
enough so it cuts through
the flesh
some blood starts coming
out of the cut
i feel a sense of relief
everything is gone
all my feelings
all my anger
all my thoughts
now a calming effect
runs through my body
its over
now i'm left with a
scar
a reminder of what i did
and all the reasons
why i did it |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sweet ang3l (8-27-2004 - 12:59 AM)
| I LIKED THE POEM, BUT I THINK YOU ARE CAPABLE OF BETTER WORK |
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