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expect-- comment
written by teejavus06:33 PM 4/3/05all i can say about expectation
that it is the first step towards desperation
that leads to utter frustration
and ultimately to destruction |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Hazelnutswirl717 (4-3-2005 - 06:34 PM)
| ha! Short, sweet, and true... keep it up homes! |
by eminemsis (4-3-2005 - 06:38 PM)
by pain+sex=good (4-3-2005 - 06:40 PM)
| Ouch! Feeling a little down hun? |
by (guest) (4-3-2005 - 06:40 PM)
| well
it was gr8 keep it up
basically its short and a very sweet one
ankana |
by scoobydoorocks115 (4-3-2005 - 06:46 PM)
| Short and to the point and I really liked it...good job! |
by nailsinmyheart (4-3-2005 - 06:46 PM)
| nice...its right to the point and i can really relate |
by (guest) (4-4-2005 - 02:05 PM)
by y2khai (4-4-2005 - 04:28 PM)
| Nice hun- short but nice! |
by Schizophrenia (4-5-2005 - 06:39 PM)
| Wow...You used BIG word's...0_0 |
by gothic_gorilla (4-5-2005 - 06:39 PM)
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