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this is my haiku : ) {plz comment}
written by poorgirl4206:39 PM 4/3/05Life is short and goes by fast
It hurts inside and makes you want to cry
Fighting and war coz distruction
Everything always fall apart |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by poorgirl42 (4-3-2005 - 06:43 PM)
| comment me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!! |
by Ruined_Hopes (4-3-2005 - 06:48 PM)
| a bit sad you commente don your own Haiku, you could have just put it in authors notes! lol but enough bad mouthing, i think it pictures life perfectly! good work |
by Death Tone (4-3-2005 - 10:36 PM)
by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 03:43 PM)
| doesnt any fucking person who leaves poems on this site know the differense between a haiku and a limerick dang but the poem was good it just wasnt a haiku ~nikki~ |
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