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Beasts of the Horizon
written by zen07:18 PM 4/6/04I can't avoid it day after day
I see more sheep making their way
Lost in life as a numbing haze
They follow the heard in their daily graze
Towing the load is a broken spirit
See not the driver for a dangling carrot
Ambition to grow as enticement elude
but once in posession the farce is renewed
now Rote repetition is all that is real
Lost is a passion, a dreaming, a zeal
You're free range naught consequence
As long as you roam inside your lil fence
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I suck at this. I submitted to test the poetry script.
Beasts of the Horizon is unfinished and I might add/change more to it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Peanut (4-6-2004 - 07:20 PM)
| Whoa.. ha, go Zen!! Very good. :) |
by Cat (4-7-2004 - 02:34 PM)
| Thats really kool zen!!!!! |
by Lady Killa (4-8-2004 - 01:35 AM)
| So true....We all live in a lil fence.... |
by Tallow (4-8-2004 - 06:01 PM)
by Emma! (4-10-2004 - 12:01 PM)
| Awww how sweet zen. I just love you!!! |
by Ollie The Magic Hobo (4-24-2004 - 03:12 PM)
| Hey zen, I thought you said you're no poet. I had to guess what some words meant, but I think I got it. :up: good job |
by bi-polar atheist (7-29-2004 - 12:00 AM)
| yay, zens a poet...woohoo |
by SilverlineKai (9-23-2004 - 10:45 AM)
by freakroses (11-2-2004 - 06:11 PM)
| wow zen thats amazing and i thought you said your no good at stuff like that
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by nicolelover (1-20-2005 - 02:47 PM)
| the poem is so deep and vey intriguing. |
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