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» Poem: Dear Lovely Knife
Dear Lovely Knife
written by bloody_tears_girl
12:06 AM 4/4/05
cut my skin, dear lovely knife,
as you stab, as you slice.
i run my finger across your tip,
then run your blade across my wrist.

make me gasp, make me bleed,
why are you so good to me?
make me smile, make me cry,
dear lovely knife, just let me die.

and i know for me, you'll always stay sharp,
dear lovely knife, stab my heart
im sorry, but now i must say goodbye,
dear lovely knife, thanks for helping me die.


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» Comments / Feedback
by lonelyshadowangel (4-4-2005 - 12:16 AM)
that is good and sad

by Fallen_Before (4-4-2005 - 12:18 AM)
omg thes fucking amazing...it is soo good

by (guest) (4-4-2005 - 01:27 AM)
wow. that is a madd good poem. i like it a lot. good job on it.

by trulybroken57 (4-4-2005 - 01:42 AM)
WOW!!!!!!!! that is soo gr8! no forced ryhmes.......yet still it rhymed.......hard to do........that was so amazing and i relate completely..........

by hellhunk (4-4-2005 - 02:39 AM)
perfect poem i loved it i can relate 2 u keep writin and ill keep readin hey if u got AIM my sn is freddycrouger7 k chill

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