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written by CLC_RockGirl02:37 PM 4/4/05I am walking up the stairs soaking wet
I can feel my pulse in my fingertips
I take off all my close and my beret
Now I watch the blood as it slowly drips
As the bathroom mirrors slowly fogged up
Finally what all had happened came back
I still don’t remember seeing the truck
But I remember a deafening smack
I got dressed and wondered down the stairs
I began to feel dizzy and out of breathe
The world faded out and so did my cares
I awoke and everyone is upset
My one and only love started crying
Apathetically I said, “I’m dieing.” |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by DemonSlayer (4-4-2005 - 02:43 PM)
| Hi. I like your poem. I'm dying too. |
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