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Waiting..
written by Josh_x03:32 PM 4/4/05I can taste your fear
Lingering in my mouth
I can feel your pain
All through my body
I can hear your screams
Although you aren't near
I never thought you'd leave
I always relied on you
Now i have no idea what to do
But pray for the day
You'll come here to stay
Please let the day come
It was so easy to fall inlove with you
It's going to be much harder falling out
Even though you say i don't care
Even though you think i'm never there
I'll still be here waiting
For the day you come back
Never to leave again. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by skulls (4-4-2005 - 03:37 PM)
| hi think ur poem is great luv Lizzie |
by Jonismyeternallove (4-4-2005 - 05:06 PM)
| very good reminds me of my breakup i can't believe i still love him too!
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by (guest) (4-4-2005 - 09:44 PM)
| aww sweet poem. is this about someone u lost? i've lost my girlfriend, she left me for another guy . well good poem. Kyle |
by Love_Me_Back_ (4-4-2005 - 10:08 PM)
| Wow. I Agree With Kyle Too, And My Name Is Kyle, How Fun. My Girlfriend Killed Herself though, so i guess you could say she "left" me but it's probably my fault, well anywho very good writing, I've read alot of your poems and they all are great. Well Bye I Guess. --Kyle--- |
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