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» Poem: ALL ALONE
ALL ALONE
written by demented_vampire
05:34 PM 4/4/05
We said we would be friends forever,
nothing would get in our way.
We would be there for eachother,
forever in a day.

There was never any problems,
I never caused you pain.
But now its all different,
we arent the same.

It took us a while,
to realize it would never last.
Something you did is comming for you,
from your past.

One day we were talking,
everything was fine.
We were talking about a boy we both liked,
and you screamed out MINE!!

I didnt have a problem with it,
I kinda didnt care.
Till one day when i needed you the most,
you werent there.

That night we were suppose to meet at his house,
but you both didnt show.
I knew it wasnt worth it,
I wish I didnt go.

It was late around 2 A.M,
I was walking home.
It was a cold night,
and I was all alone.

I heard a noise behind me,
but I was too tired to look behind.
I wish that wasnt the case,
I think I lost my mind.

Something grabbed me from behind,
I was scared I closed my eyes.
I didnt want to think about what was happining,
so I told myself lies.

I didnt know what was going on,
I passed out.
When I woke up the next day,
I didnt feel sorry and I didnt have a doubt.

My body was full of scars,
I could barely breath.
Its all your fault,
you were suppose to meet me!

When you asked me "what happend?",
I said "you would know if you showed up".
She said "im sorry",
I said "save it, you always have an excuse... just
shut up".

That was the last day we spoke,
and Im not sad.
I wont give her the time to explain,
I want her to feel bad.

I never asked her why she didnt go,
I knew it came from her past.
I dont even want to know,
I knew it wasnt gunna last.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
explains itself. comments would be appreciated

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by skaterdude567 (4-4-2005 - 08:00 PM)
Damn...That's pretty good.

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