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» Poem: fucked up world
fucked up world
written by ********M.A.S*********
06:20 PM 4/4/05
bombing for peace
is like fuking for virginity
this world is build of
the great big trinity
no future

we got a past and our present but no future

do you believe in life after death?
I believe in life before death
we're obscene
and so grotesque. You have never seen
things like this before

we got a past and our present but no future

Bush said that you had to respect life
why does he kill so many people?

I'm not a believer
I'm more a reciever
I give and I take
try to forget that my life is fake

we got a past and our present but no future

is it something we can do
no
is it something we can do
no


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my spelling suck and I know it

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by ihavenoname01234 (4-4-2005 - 06:22 PM)
Wow. I really like it. (yeah I know, what a lame comment.)

by penguins3333 (4-4-2005 - 06:28 PM)
awsom poem and i almost never say that except the last line i think the messege shouldent be sursire but what u where ariginaly tolking about which was the world is fucked well latter carl

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