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BLOODY BEAUTY QUEENpt.2(comments-n-e-1)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
09:54 PM 4/4/05
your a superficial hallogarm
made for the lust of every man
the miss america of the damned
so much plastic you can't stand
your mascara lipstick blood
running wild like a sea
your past is filled with travesties
so sorry for the pain, your majesty
in your land,your the crimson queen
your given the crown on bended knee
your scars are looking just so lovely
the pride and joy of your own world
the wish and dream of every girl
the blood on your dress as it unfirls
is enough to make your own veins curl
i'll take away, all your pain girl
just come and step into my world
i'll show you pain youve only heard
in this place, nothing but hurt
i'll let them see all of your cuts
as the crowd sees them ,open and shut
the accesorie of a noose,
is just a must
is there no one a queen can trust?


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by TearsOfBetrayal (4-4-2005 - 10:03 PM)
wow!! really amazing, wonderfully writen

by brokenxsmile (4-4-2005 - 10:07 PM)
awesome poem! great imagery and descriptive words, love it!

by acdcgurl361 (4-4-2005 - 10:44 PM)
i love that poem it was great i think it 's the best poem i ever read

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