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» Poem: im sorry (comment if ya think its good)
im sorry (comment if ya think its good)
written by JUGGABLOOD
12:38 AM 4/5/05
if your reading this i finally did it
sorry i didnt say goodbye there was no reason
you know why i did it
i dont have to admit it

can you handle looking at the pictures ?
do you find joy with my cold corpes on the floor ?
do you like to see my cuts ?
poor salt in my open sores....

well thats not me
you know it to be true
you like to hurt me
but now its through....

i finally did it
if youve read this you know why
i dont have to describe the pain down deep inside
i would like for you to understand but its useless

you could slit my throte and id still apologize
my pain ran deep an true
kill me now
and with my last breath id apalogize for bleeding on your shoes.....


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feeling like shit.....

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 01:33 AM)
a i think ur poem was pretty good so keep doing it ight - tina aka Buckwheat

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