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Tour my Heart(plz comment)
written by dark_child0704:27 AM 4/5/05Everyone thinks I have no opinion,
that I have no voice,
that I am a follower,
that cant make my own choice.
Let me take you on a tour,
a tour inside my head, inside my heart,
so you can see what puts a smile on my face,
and what makes me fall apart.
My friends,
my true friends that really care,
the ones that know when something is wrong,
even if a smile is present there.
They mean the world to me,
I love them and they love me,
I look out for them,
just like they look out for me.
My family,
I love them too,
if I ever lost them,
I dont know what the hell I would do.
My boyfriend,
he is the greatest guy I have ever met,
now that I have him by my side,
my whole life is set.
Or so you would think! I showed you the sunshine,
so let me show you the rain,
I showed you the glamour,
now let's tour my pain.
Have you ever felt like you werent good enough?
Good enough for even those you know care?
Or wonder why your boyfriend is with you,
and not with a prettier girl over there?
Disappointment?
It is the worse especially when it is something you believe in with all your heart,
and your father's cruel and hateful words,
are tearing you apart.
Now you have toured the real me not what people think they see,
you have seen what puts a smile on my face,
and what tears me apart,
what puts tears in my eyes,
and what breaks my heart! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is for anyone who thinks they know me.....believe me, you guys cant even begin to imagine
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| » Comments / Feedback | by zver (4-5-2005 - 04:37 AM)
| evryone who thnks this bitches oppinion matters please stand up * cricklet cricket* nope no one thought so |
by (guest) (4-5-2005 - 08:56 PM)
| lilcorky i know how this feels and i hate that you are going right now and it doesn't matter what others say or think like the bitch who left that last comment . this is really good and i hope if there is any thing that is wrong you can share cause i'll always be here. |
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