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dear zver and others
written by butcakes07:36 AM 4/5/05you kick peoples asses, but you do it while theyre asleep
thats why everyone calls you "so damn cheap"
or maybe your the one whos actually asleep
kicking ass is a dream you wish you could keep
mummy hurt me there, daddy hit me here
"i wanna slit my wrist and die" is all i ever hear
people writing poems after drinking some beer
how about writing sumthing with depth you can hold dear?!
i rarely read poems about butterflies and spring
and beautiful birds that sit on your shoulder and sing
such a nice change from "i make the rope a ring"
hanging yourself because of your unforgiven sin
reading depressing stories of fathers beating daughters
and a ruthless heartless guy who slaughters
people die, but all i hear is laughters
coming from the mouths of those thereafters
you say "grow a ****" i say grow a heart
theres nothing in your chest but an evil fart
Jesus didnt die on the cross -an earthly depart
so you could turn someones sadness into your art
a guy loves a guy, you say theyre a f*g
well i love my guy friends, but we dont sh*g
its coz i have a heart inside, not a doused rag
my hearts in my chest, not under hoofs of a stag
as i struggle to rhyme and tell u how i feel
i just want u to know Gods love for you is real
and if u dont know him, then maybe he'll reveal
get some love and people will like you -thats a deal |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i think i said everything i wanted to say in the poem... just get some love into your lives people... i can only see so much hate on this site - in saying that, thanx to all the people who actually write nice poems!!! stuff that actually has worth and depth and refreshes the mind... i dont know how many times ive heard about people slitting their wrists this week... it sickens me whether your serious or not - be raw, be real. be who you are, not who you think others want u to be... thats why our world is going downhill... ;) peace out, write positive stuff please! ~angels exist~
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| » Comments / Feedback | by tatteredwings (4-5-2005 - 07:42 AM)
| this poem is really good....your a really good writer....and the fact that it speaks the truth is probably the best part! |
by Firequeen (4-5-2005 - 07:44 AM)
| i really like the honasty in this poem, good written to =) And i totally agree about there being to much depressive poems here.. sad to say i write em, but for me. writing the shit makes me feel better.. weird aye? |
by zver (4-5-2005 - 07:47 AM)
| ok umm i complemented u before u because although u were still of ur theory on me was more logical then evryone elses= butthis kinda ticked me off first of if u read my stuff u would see that im not depressed i make fun of depression its sad i am angry but i have my reason for that and dont try to go to a place that you dont know exists since your the first one to nicely say somethng to me instead of tellimg me to fuck myself im gona just give u a warnin and not start some argument but i have warned u u dont know who ur screwing with |
by maledeth (4-5-2005 - 07:51 AM)
| Yeah! You don't know who you're screwing with! You're screwing with Boris, the mad Russian!!! But I heard he likes to get screwed....hahahaha!!! Filthy fucker! |
by maledeth (4-5-2005 - 07:52 AM)
| And for the person who wrote this.....there is no peace till you've had suffering. |
by zver (4-5-2005 - 07:56 AM)
| in case u dint know maledeth and genocide are two brothers who like to have anal sex with eachother and they dont like me cuz they tried o argue with us on some ww2 subject and i got 1 frined of mine to and me and him totaly rained complete ass so to this day those fagets are still jealous |
by maledeth (4-5-2005 - 08:00 AM)
| Hahaha! Jealous? OF you?!?! Why would we be jealous of a fucking filthy cunt? You're worth the trash on a vile street. |
by Genocide Reaper (4-5-2005 - 08:12 AM)
| Well, I'm not a suicide poet.. I'm more of a psychotic poet. I'm pro death, and pro hate. So, I don't see any love coming from me any time soon, just brotherly love for my Bro's and Society dwelling motherfuckers in the MPS. |
by zver (4-5-2005 - 08:12 AM)
| ok but boy listen i told u not to fuck with what u dont know and ill give u one alst harsh warning so shut the fuck up and mind ur fuking buisness |
by Genocide Reaper (4-5-2005 - 08:28 AM)
| Who are you talking to kid? Yourself? With that pathetic excuse you dub the English language? |
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