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» Poem: sadness and depression
sadness and depression
written by bleedblack
09:21 PM 4/5/05
i don't know how much more i can take
my heart is falling weak and about to break
my sadness and depression are starting to kick in
pushing me down, not letting me win
i'm being worn down going straight to the bone
dying inside in a place where no one knows
fading so silently that soon i'll be gone
my feelings have taken over and finally won


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it sucks .. feeling down ..

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» Comments / Feedback
by pipa (4-5-2005 - 09:23 PM)
i like it, it speaks to me.

by bloodlyvalentine (4-5-2005 - 09:58 PM)
i love ur poetry. dont let em win man!!!

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