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Bloody Love
written by DeadInside18709:36 PM 4/5/05Your nails drive deep into my skin
Releasing my love and affection within
Tonight we make this bloody pact
And it shall forever stay intact
You can alone kiss the pain away
Just seeing you makes my day
The bite marks on my neck have never felt so great
As I feel you suck me dry my mind is in another state
So take this blade and strike me deep and true
For this is my blood oath to you
Blood now seeps from every pour
For you I will shed every ounce and more |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
In a way it's based on one of my favorite songs, "This Flesh a Tomb" by Atreyu, please leave comments
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dead_Rose (4-5-2005 - 09:52 PM)
| cool poem reminds me of a vampire, i love vampires :). |
by LoOnYLuNa2314 (4-5-2005 - 10:38 PM)
| i love this poem it gives love a twist and yet it's so true. Love hurts yet we all still want more.... |
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