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» Poem: love? right?
love? right?
written by rayikari
09:57 PM 4/5/05
we all know how a break up feels?
right?
we all know how it feels to be loved,
and then have your heart ripped out of your chest,
just as if it was nothing?
right?
we all know pain,
both emotional and physical?
right?
why is life cruel to those who are simply trying to live?
does fate have something against those who love to live
or is it simply that love cannot bear to prosper?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i think my boyfriend and i are plumeting down the hill of misery heading towrads breakup. damn life...

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» Comments / Feedback
by pipa (4-5-2005 - 09:59 PM)
i like it, it speaks to me. If you think you and your boyfriend might break up, talk to him, sort it out. Xx

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