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Death (comment please)
written by xXxBlOoDyMexXx10:08 PM 4/5/05Heavy Breathing,
Everyone leaving.
The drop of a tear,
The hint of fear.
Spinning room,
The nearing doom.
The heart racing,
Death facing.
The cold skin,
The darkness within.
The shutting casket,
The roses in the basket.
The dirt covering,
The sent of death hovering......... . |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mansonsheep (4-6-2005 - 05:56 PM)
| It was really good and I liked it a lot!! |
by good*angel*slapper*1101 (4-7-2005 - 09:41 PM)
| it was really really good |
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