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Longing my Love (PLZ comment)
written by CROSS+CUTTER10:23 PM 4/5/05I need to see you, I need you here.
Another day without you would bring another tear.
I need to look upon your face
And feel the warmth of your embrace.
Quiet and cold my whole world seemed
Though it would pass by as I would dream.
I'd beat, cut and pull my hair
Whenever I'd wake without you there.
These lonely dreams are not bound to nights,
All day long I would have these fights.
Dreaming, waking, cutting, bleeding
This is all I know to keep life proceeding.
Though I cannot end my lonely rhyme
With anything too sublime,
My love for one is not unknown,
I've poured my heart to you alone |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't know if this one is any good. I wanted it to be great b/c he means so much to me... Please tell me what you think!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by melynda (4-8-2005 - 03:12 PM)
| i love it, i think itz madd cute n i can relate bcuz i jus got broke'n ^ from an 11 month relationship! |
by lonelyshadowangel (4-9-2005 - 04:54 PM)
| that is really good i love is!!! it is soo good!!! |
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