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» Poem: WhEn YoUr GiRl SaYs...(comntz-plz+thanx)
WhEn YoUr GiRl SaYs...(comntz-plz+thanx)
written by Ev0l_sin#TRIP
11:20 PM 4/5/05
i know this does not rhyme,so try to read it bit by bit,i tried to flow as best i could...


~When your girl is quiet,
Millions of things are running in her mind.
~When your girl is not arguing,
She is thinking deeply with her time
~When your girl looks at you with eyes full of questions,
She is wondering how long you will be around.
~When your girl answers "I'm fine"after a few seconds...
She is not fine at all,you can tell by the sound
~When your girl stares at you,
She is wondering why you are lying.
~When your girl lays on your chest,
For you she would choose dying
~When your girl calls you everyday,
She is seeking for your attention.
~When your girl wants to see you everyday,
She just wants contentment
~When your girl says "I love you",
She means it.
~When your girl says that she can't live without you,
She'll stand by you thru it
~When your girl says "I miss you",
Nothing in this world could be more true


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is way more girly than i usually or for that matter,will EVER write again,and yes i know it doesn't rhyme!,but say something if you like it

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