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.CUTTERS.REALIZATION.
written by perfect.flaws01:00 AM 4/6/05At first there was no drip
because on the knife i had no grip.
At second i drew the blood
just enough to take a sip.
Ive done it nice and slow
just to get a steady flow.
Ive done it hard and fast
just so it will last.
But no matter, It wont change the past.
At third a little deep
and down my arm the blood did creap.
Fourth i skipped,
Five ive never felt more alive.
Ive done it nice and slow,
just 'cause i cant say no.
Ive done it hard and fast,
maybe i'll get a cast.
But no matter, it wont stop the past.
At six, the clock now starts its ticks.
This isnt all games and tricks
i dont just do it for the kicks,
But so i'll forget the past.
You want a steady flow?
do it nice and slow..
You want it to last?
start to hack and do it fast..
You want to erase your memory?
Forget it. You cant change the past. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloody_tears_girl (4-6-2005 - 01:08 AM)
| wow, this is really good and i can definatly relate |
by my_lucky_7 (4-6-2005 - 01:15 AM)
| love it... makes me realize why i cut myself... its my past... i can relate to it.. awesome ! |
by LonelyIsGreen (4-6-2005 - 01:22 AM)
| I loved the poem, except I just didnt like how you tried to make it ryme. . . otherwise it was a great job. |
by perfect.flaws (4-6-2005 - 01:46 AM)
| Umm see... here's the thing.. i dont TRY and make it rhyme, if i do.. i dont do it so it wont make sense, because whats the point in that.. and it did make sense, so great. |
by trulybroken57 (4-6-2005 - 02:29 AM)
| i relate completely.......maybe it is my past..........newyaz, thanx for the comment on my poem........good job........ |
by PartyHard420 (4-7-2005 - 02:16 AM)
| awesome poem... totally can relate |
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