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» Poem: i care too much
i care too much
written by Xx brOken xX
03:02 AM 4/6/05
i can feel my heart breaking;
piece by piece its shattering.
you just watch as i fall down;
farther and farther.
i can feel tears swell up in my eyes.
falling gently down my cheeks
all i wanted was you....
everything i needed was in you
you got me through the day
your problem is that
you just dont care
my problem is...
i care too much.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i haven't written a poem in forever. so let me know how my rusty skills are doing..

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» Comments / Feedback
by Tukenstein (4-6-2005 - 03:03 AM)
...!... huh err look behind you, it's a mirror

by qb54life (4-6-2005 - 03:24 AM)
that was b-e-a-utiful!!!

by cRaSHaNdbUrN653 (4-6-2005 - 03:40 AM)
this 1 iz nice/co0L.

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