» Poem: i care too much |
i care too much
written by Xx brOken xX03:02 AM 4/6/05i can feel my heart breaking;
piece by piece its shattering.
you just watch as i fall down;
farther and farther.
i can feel tears swell up in my eyes.
falling gently down my cheeks
all i wanted was you....
everything i needed was in you
you got me through the day
your problem is that
you just dont care
my problem is...
i care too much. |
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i haven't written a poem in forever. so let me know how my rusty skills are doing.. [ View Xx brOken xX's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 367 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Tukenstein (4-6-2005 - 03:03 AM)
...!... huh err look behind you, it's a mirror
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by qb54life (4-6-2005 - 03:24 AM)
by cRaSHaNdbUrN653 (4-6-2005 - 03:40 AM)
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