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» Poem: Scars*
Scars*
written by Trapezium
10:09 AM 8/3/04
Mental scars, they play with your head,
Play games with your mind, they make you want to be dead,

They stay with you forever,
Quietly haunting like bad weather,
Not seen by the outside,
But eating up your inside,
They slowly kill you oh so painful,
They make you think you are oh so shameful.

Phsyical scars, people point and they jeer,
They're annoying you all throughout the year,

People laugh at them and they shout,
They make you never want to be seen about,
Cover where you cut, the sad reality,
Just so you think there is some confidentiality,
Stare at them sometimes, think what have i done?
I'm too young for this oh too young .


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It's not too good... my mind was too clouded over... too much s**t has been happening just recently

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» Comments / Feedback
by i_love_sandy (8-3-2004 - 04:21 PM)
I like this poem alot. ur a great poet, love. smooches.:)

by crimson_instability (8-3-2004 - 04:38 PM)
i read this poem and think "me." kudos :)

by SuperBob (8-3-2004 - 08:31 PM)
wow i relate to this one only too well...hell last night was a perfect example of that

by cryptic_misery (8-5-2004 - 09:00 PM)
Hey buddy I love the poem! =D It's very great I can relate to it as well. What time are you normally on yahoo? It seems like we're always on at different times lmao. anyway much love to ya buie!

by hells_angel (9-15-2004 - 08:19 PM)
hey sandy...angela here! im crying right now cuz of this poem! its the sad honest truth...

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