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Descreption Of My Tears... (comments)
written by porkchop_chick05:47 AM 4/6/05My tears,
tears raindrops sliding down my eyes,
tears a river that leds to his ocean,
tears made of glass that fall only to break,
tears a sheild to hide the pain,
tears a mirror to reflect nothing but memories,
tears a waterfall full of suffering,
tears nothing but emotion finally being expressed,
ooh those tears of mine. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by CROSS+CUTTER (4-6-2005 - 06:14 AM)
| Creative, I like it, esp. the tears of glass. |
by bloody_tears_girl (4-6-2005 - 06:18 AM)
| i'd have to agree with the comment above me. very nice. |
by death_angel513 (4-6-2005 - 07:03 AM)
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