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» Poem: hurting
hurting
written by the_pain_vampiress
10:02 AM 4/6/05
hurting inside and out
feeling like theres nowhere to turn
so i turn to the blade
as my rears begin to burn

every day and every night
the hurting never ends
inflicted by my loved ones
and those i thought were friends

twisting and turning
on the inside of my heart
everyone ignoring
as im slowly ripped apart

suicide and death
always on my mind
always looking for a way out
that i never seem to find

and as each day passes
the hurting just wont die
and i know that someday soon
the blade will slip and ill say goodbye


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» Comments / Feedback
by PartyHard420 (4-7-2005 - 02:05 AM)
hey, that's a really good poem... and i know you don't want to hear this as you've heard it enough.. but it does get better... trust me... i tried to kill myself 2 years ago.. it's been a long road ahead but in the end it was worth it... i still think about it sometimes.. wish i never got caught in the middle of it... but it works out...

by damnednforgotten (4-19-2005 - 10:12 AM)
i really liked the poem, (u cant compare anothers life to your own, it just dont work)

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